Quit nitpicking already.Survivor11 wrote: ↑Tue Oct 15, 2019 3:52 pmYou aren't using them correctly.
Tue Oct 15, 2019 3:56 pm
Quit nitpicking already.Survivor11 wrote: ↑Tue Oct 15, 2019 3:52 pmYou aren't using them correctly.
Tue Oct 15, 2019 4:49 pm
Tue Oct 15, 2019 5:43 pm
Tue Oct 15, 2019 6:51 pm
What did i screw up on?Survivor11 wrote: ↑Tue Oct 15, 2019 5:43 pmCeta, I recommend reading up on a lot of SCPF lore before trying to write one.
Wed Oct 16, 2019 1:43 am
That was your first mistake.81Ceta_Deta wrote: ↑Tue Oct 15, 2019 6:51 pmWhat did i screw up on?Survivor11 wrote: ↑Tue Oct 15, 2019 5:43 pmCeta, I recommend reading up on a lot of SCPF lore before trying to write one.
Its meant to look like it was written and put together swiftly by a scientist.
Wed Oct 16, 2019 1:50 am
Wed Oct 16, 2019 1:53 am
Took me a week whilst binge-watching and binge-reading.TheArbiter25 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 16, 2019 1:50 amHow long does it take one to learn the basics of SCP Foundation and it’s lore?
Wed Oct 16, 2019 8:26 am
Yeah. Fair point. Thanks for the feedback. Its hard typing on this deviceSurvivor11 wrote: ↑Wed Oct 16, 2019 1:43 amThat was your first mistake.81Ceta_Deta wrote: ↑Tue Oct 15, 2019 6:51 pmWhat did i screw up on?Survivor11 wrote: ↑Tue Oct 15, 2019 5:43 pmCeta, I recommend reading up on a lot of SCPF lore before trying to write one.
Its meant to look like it was written and put together swiftly by a scientist.
Logs are supposed to be in-depth reports of an SCP after serious testing and study.
They should outline all containment procedures.
Your second mistake was "commandos" and I'm not sure what that refers to.
Your third was the amount of said Commandos.
Generally, even larger Keter SCPs have only one or two squads of four to five personnel.
Finally, your story is just multiple existing stories mashed together.
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